For the summer learning journey my task was to pretend I was the first person to step on the moon Neil Armstrong was the first person from America to reach the moon. I have tp imagine that I got to reach the moon and make a poem about it.
I have reached the moon
and I'm happy supper happy.
what great time I will have bouncing on the moon.
The moon has
so much room to play around and bounce
the moon in shiny and so round
I can see it all around.
Tuesday, December 17, 2019
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Hi Angela,
ReplyDeleteGreat start Angela! I love how you have talked about what it's like on the moon.
The gravity is super low so you would be bouncing all over the place :)
Do you like space? What would you do if you were in space?
Check out this handy link to making a poem. If you want to give another poem a go just pop it in the comments :) Try making an acrostic poem!
https://www.poetry4kids.com/lessons/poetry-writing-lessons/
Keep it up!
Gabe