In the summer learning journey my task was for my own choice ,there were a list of swimmers and surfers and we had to write things about one of them. I choose Kelly Slater and I have to write his
name, A sentence about what they have done, A sentence about how they/their work has had an impact on the lives of others.
1. Kelly's name is Kelly Slater.
2. Kelly is best known for his unprecedented 11 world surfing championships. He is widely regarded as the greatest professional surfer of all time.
3. Kelly Slater saves woman and child from wild ocean.
I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Saturday, December 21, 2019
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Hi Angela,
ReplyDeleteKelly Slater is an awesome role model because of the amount of hard work and dedication he puts into his surfing.
Great writing Angela I had no idea that Kelly had helped a women and child!
Make sure your not coping directly from websites and are writing other peoples work in your own words,
Keep up the great work!
Gabe