For the summer learning journey my task was to retell a story about Yusra Mardini a swimmer who saved 20 poeples lives. here is the story
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I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Saturday, December 21, 2019
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Hi Angela,
ReplyDeleteIsn't Yusras story inspiring! I cannot imagine would it would be like to be a refuge.
Thank you for rewriting the story Angela, I had no idea that she was living in Germany now. Would you like to visit Germany too?
Pictures would be great here to show your readers who you are writing about! Something to think about for next time. :)
Keep up the awesome work!
Gabe