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Monday, December 23, 2019

Activity 3: ‘Dear Jacinda’

In the summer learning journey my task was to make a letter to jacinda adren and tell her to make something happen that you want to happen. here is mine.

Dear jacinda ardern,

I think we should make swimming lessons free because some people love swimming but their family can not afford it, that makes the kids that can not afford will missout. What if a tsunami happens some kids have never learned how to swim drown from the tsunami, that would be really bad. So we have to make sure that we keep them safe a teach them how to swim so next time they will know. 

1 comment:

  1. Morning Angela,

    Great letter! I think that having children get access to swimming letters is an awesome idea. Think about all the people who would be safe if this was the case.

    I really like how you are looking out for the people who are less fortunate, this is really kind of you. Keep up the great work!

    It can be a little hard to read your work when it is all on one line. Next time try to get it new sentences on new lines. :)

    Keep up the great work!

    Gabe

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