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Monday, September 3, 2018

the clown poem

There once was a clown
That had a frown
He went to the brown
Potato town
And he got a new  gown
But it had a breakdown
now it's time for shut down!!!!!

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we have been learning to make poems and lots of types.
   
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2018 at 11:30 AM

    Hi Angela, it's Angie here. Well done! You did a great job! I like how you wrote the poem. But maybe next time make it make sense, and maybe you can add some punctuations. Yet, I like it! Good job! Keep up the good work!

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2018 at 11:15 AM

      thank you angle I will make sure that it will make since do you like potatoes?

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  2. UnknownSeptember 29, 2018 at 7:02 AM

    Hi Angela you did a good job. I like your poem and your hard work. This is your mum Kamala xxx

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