sprinkling everywhere cold and icy and white
pretty and unique
I feel like one
winter
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hello Angela
ReplyDeleteI like your cquien it reminds me of snow
and winter
-Jordan
thank you Jordan this poem is about winter do you like winter? cause I hate winter but it is good when you can have some hot chocolate.
DeleteHello Angela it is your friend Merika I love all the work you have done but where is you blurb,and your lables but I still like your work and also make sure it make's sense
ReplyDeletehi merika thank you for teeing me but it is not suppose to make scine
Deletehave you ever written a poem befor? because I have witten a lot bye