To persuade

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In writing I have been adding our own opinions in our writing, we also teach people to persuade as well. We started by looking at some examples to help us know what we were going to write. Then the the teacher started writing the success criteria. Then when we looked at some examples the teacher printed out plans for us so we know what we were going to right. The next day and on we wrote each paragraph each day. So basically it was paragraph per day. Then when we were finished we had to self check, partner check and then teacher check. While I was doing this I found it challenging but from the help with my teacher it was great.

Here is my writing.

Wearing a helmet while riding a scooter should be compulsory!

Don’t you think children should wear a helmet while riding a scooter?

I strongly believe that children should wear a helmet while riding a scooter. It is dangerous.It can lead to serious injuries, sometimes even disabilities. It can also keep the head nice and warm so you won’t get fevers. Some helmets include a sun visor so children will not get blinded by the sun when they ride on their scooter (or bike).

Firstly, everyone should wear a helmet for their  own safety. Children are really delicate, and if their bones get broken it will lead to a serious injury consequence. Some disabilities can be permanent, so they might have to deal with it for the rest of their lives. A helmet is meant to protect your head, if you don’t wear one your head will not be protected. Because this is compulsory, everyone should wear a helmet while riding a scooter.

Secondly, It will  keep your head warm and dry when it rains, it will prevent you from getting a fever. It will help you see through the dark because some helmets have a light on the front of it that will help you see in the dark. If you start wearing a helmet right now you are going to be much safer. You will be better at riding a scooter as well, because you are going to be able to see better in the dark. Like I said if you do not wear a helmet while riding a scooter there will be serious consequences.

Finally, helmets are going to help you see through the day time when it is sunny. Some helmets include sun visors so you will be protected by the sun, you will never have to deal with the sun being in your face while you are riding your scooter. How handy is it when you are wearing a hat and a helmet at the same time? Isn’t it amazing? Not only is this helpful bit it is going to prevent you from getting into a crash. You're not going to be blinded by the sun ever again.

In conclusion, wearing a helmet while riding a scooter should be compulsory. If a helmet is not worn you will get hurt, you will get a cold and you will not be able to see in the day time when it’s sunny-dark. Remember, if a helmet is not worn then there will be serious consequences. If the helmet protects your head then they will definitely protect your life insurance, right?.

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