In writing I have been looking at blog to find quality blog posts, there is a success criteria Miss McLeod made on a google presentation. On the presentations there are blog posts that we look at and we need to see if they are part of the success criteria. on the last light of the presentation I had to find any blog from our cluster that we could add. I found a really nice blog so I added it to the slide, the blog I found is really nice. Ruby's blog.
In the success criteria there are texts that we have to highlight a certain color here are the meanings to the colors: Red: This blog is missing this element Green: the elements of a quality blog post you can locate in the post Yellow: Almost there
Here is the presentation.
please comment on my blog.
I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, May 7, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Kia ora Angela! Thank you for explaining the activity to your readers so well in your blurb, it really helps them to understand your learning. You have worked really hard in writing this week on quality blogging. Why did you like looking at Ruby's blog?
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Hi Miss McLeod,
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I like ruby's blog because the posts she makes really hooks me into the story and she really gives information about the story/post.