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Wednesday, April 10, 2019

Halswell quarry trip


One month ago we went on our first trip for this term but it got so hot that Isabella got sick and the last one was so hard miss. goslin  was tired. 
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  1. AnonymousApril 10, 2019 at 12:15 PM

    Hi Angela,
    I really like your story about Halswell quarry trip. I like how you use so many present tenses in your story. Maybe next time you can add more and more details in your story.
    By Jyoshika.

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  2. Miss GoslinApril 28, 2019 at 5:06 PM

    Hi Angela, Miss Goslin here! Thanks for posting your Halswell Quarry story. I enjoy how you included what you learnt, about reading maps, they were pretty cool weren't they. Next time make sure you self check your writing to make sure your sentences make sense and to add in any missed out punctuation.
    Looking forward to your reply.
    Miss Goslin

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    1. AnonymousApril 30, 2019 at 11:22 AM

      Thank you so much for commenting on my blog i will make sure to read my work next time

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  3. AnonymousMay 3, 2019 at 12:12 PM

    hi Angela i like how you said what was the worst part but add more detail

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