please comment on my blog
By Angela
I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Angela!
ReplyDeleteI like how you've added on your blurb "Please comment on my blog."
Maybe you could add 1 photo next time?
And I would also choose to give $100 dollars to poor people!
But why is it nice to be cool?
Just curious.
Hi Angela
ReplyDeleteI like how you've added on your blurb but maybe make it a bit longer next time . I remember when I wrote my would you rather story . I think you are very creative and smart maybe next time you could only put one image .
Hello Angela
ReplyDeleteI like how you have added your punctuation.
I think I would also go with giving 100 dollars to poor people too.
Just because like you said Its better to give it to poor people so they can survive and not starve.
Hi Angela,
ReplyDeleteI am jyoshika from south hornby school.I really like your story of would you rather and I really like your background too.I want to learn how do you put the background.
Great job!"
From Jyoshika
hello Angela I like you blog post for the second one I would rather be able to talk to animals and for the first one I would rather give one hundred dollars to pore people. what is your favorite animal ?
ReplyDeleteBongor Angela
ReplyDeleteIt´s Aone from South Hornby School. I am wondering why did u put one more bigger than the other? This one is a Question would u rather go on a trip to pairs and spend all your money or give all your money to pore people I think with the ones you put down I would pick pore people but I will only give. Half but at least I gave them some money so they can by what they want and I want to be helpful to them and have a positive attitude.
Talk to ya soon
Hi Angela!!
ReplyDeleteI liked how your blurb is nice and simple [comment on my blog]
Maybe just add one photo because you have two photos but it is okay.
Comment you later
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