The Extreme Dinosour

For home learning in writing I thought I could do free writing, on the site there are free writing picture prompts. From the picture you have to write or describe about that picture. I have made mine only two paragraphs because I don't want to make it to long. Here is my writing.

A long long time ago Dinosaurs were extinct because people would kill them, and now there are no dinosaurs. But there is one in New Jersey somehow it has escaped from years ago. It is wild,crazy and angry because his family and relatives had passed away so he was not happy that people killed his family and friends. So he tried being nice to everyone but everyone got scared. He tried so hard not to knock anything but it did not work. One person was not scared his name was Adain and he had always wanted to see a Dinosaur. 

Adain tried to pat the Dinosaur but it did not work so then he gave him a piece of a bar and he liked it so then he let Aidan go on his back and together they became the bravest people in new jersey.  

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