For the summer learning journey my task is to write on a diary and write an extraordinary day that has happened or just make one up. My diary has to start with "Dear diary"
Dear diary my day has been so amazing at school because we had a pool party. It was so cool I played leap frog with my friends and I played other water games too.
I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, January 3, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Angela,
ReplyDeleteWow sounds fun! Is leap frog your favourite game to play? It sounds like you have a lot of fun in school :)
One way that you can make your posts even more engaging is to use colour and pictures, this makes your work really stand out to us readers!
Keep up the good work
Gabe