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I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Thursday, August 29, 2019
A Irresistable Lunch
For the past two weeks in reading I have been working on a lunch to make online for some people to make and see how they feel. And here is mine.

please comment on my blog.
please comment on my blog.
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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Good Morning Angela i really like your a irresistable Lunch you made.It is really amazing i like how you imaged to make such a cool play. Did you no that your work was really good. And how long did it make you to make the play? next time you could put in a background.
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