Six sentence story

This week in writing we wrote a six sentence story about creating a character and adding detail.
Our focus was on creating sentence. We had to make up a story about and  HERE IS MY WORK

There once was a girl that is very talented her name is Jessica

Jessica’s talents are Netball,football,swimming,skating,bowling,basketball.

But one day there was a problem... she missed her Practice!!!!

And she got kicked out of all her sports and her big talent’s But when she went back.
The coach said “ we now have a better player so we don’t need you anymore”.

And when she heard that she was... alright  because she had to much talent’s.

That she wanted to quiet but not let the world down so now she is retired now and she
will not be the world’s best anymore she will be the world’s first.

Now she is just sitting on the couch of a sport named hockey and she’s a teacher.